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Thursday 19 March 2020

dont let go

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BEGIN WRITING HERE: The girl was riding horses and it looked so fun. because It looked like she went to the moon and it was so cool what it looked like she was holding the rope and the bird was so cold but it look so cool and the bird was it looked so cool when the girl was flying in the air and i was fun the girl was happy when she was flying and then she looked at the ground and it was to fardown so then she was sacred but when she looks up she thinks thats she in heaven and it look so cool and it like she is and angel.The moon was so bright and clear and the fog look like an spirit is flying in the air but it was magic there was now light or you can't see the sun it was dark but the moon was shining a little of light from the moon but the moon was grey the girl lose one of her shoes the bird or duck quack because the duck was scared that i might fall down onto the ground in the bush or on the road because it was to high for him the horses were white like they just came from heaven and they were clean.

Thursday 12 March 2020

The Young Detective

                TASK DESCRIPTION:This Week In Writing We Wrote A Narrative Writing Blog 
                              and i rally enjoyed doing this it was fun writing with the class.
                                                              The Young Detective
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He was staring at the magnifying glass and looking at himself he could see him looking at the magnifying glass. 



Then Adams dad was looking at him and he had lost it and Adams dad was thinking that if he was bad and so he found out that there were eyeballs in the dark And then he was looking at his eyes.  



It was the same so he had looked at himself and he was staring at the books so then looked at his face and then the dad saw him with the magnifying glass.



 I think there was someone or something in this house. There were three lamps in the house, two were on, one was off so that looked suspicious and there was a head on the top top or the shelf was in the dark.



It really sounds suspicious and a nice story about a young detective boy because it looks like he's from a new or old movie.