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Thursday 12 March 2020

The Young Detective

                TASK DESCRIPTION:This Week In Writing We Wrote A Narrative Writing Blog 
                              and i rally enjoyed doing this it was fun writing with the class.
                                                              The Young Detective
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He was staring at the magnifying glass and looking at himself he could see him looking at the magnifying glass. 



Then Adams dad was looking at him and he had lost it and Adams dad was thinking that if he was bad and so he found out that there were eyeballs in the dark And then he was looking at his eyes.  



It was the same so he had looked at himself and he was staring at the books so then looked at his face and then the dad saw him with the magnifying glass.



 I think there was someone or something in this house. There were three lamps in the house, two were on, one was off so that looked suspicious and there was a head on the top top or the shelf was in the dark.



It really sounds suspicious and a nice story about a young detective boy because it looks like he's from a new or old movie. 

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